Location : Space near the galaxy M87
Heading towards one of the black holes at the centre of the M97 galaxy. Having researched black holes scientist have suggested that there may be a black hole at the centre of M97
The storyboard starts with the character within the spaceship. There are some problematic issues with this story board that need to be addressed:
Who the character is? The storyboard does not suggest enough the characteristics and personality of the character.
Why is the character there, what is his drive, the audience has to be interested in what is happening.
The intro is too long and needs shortening.
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